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  • 5 Real Reasons People Aren’t Opening Your Emails

    Why people aren't opening your emails
    Get your emails opened.

    If you’re having a tough time figuring out why people aren’t opening your emails, you’re not alone.

    And although I offer email writing services for those who don’t have the time or simply don’t want to go through the agony of figuring out how to write compelling email copy, I want you to know that writing your own emails doesn’t have to be scary.

    In fact, I would encourage people to write their own emails for at least a little while before hiring a copywriter to take over. Why? So that you can nail down your personal voice.

    After all—and let me establish this right off the bat—your emails are NOT a corporate newsletter. You are a human being speaking to other human beings. 

    Email is simply the medium. Your words are the message. And the message is what’s most important.

    So let’s unpack some of the most common reasons your emails aren’t getting opened. Shall we?

    Why people aren't opening your emails

    1. You’re writing emails to the masses instead of having a conversation with a friend. 

    I’ve heard several marketing experts say that when writing copy (whether for a blog or an email or social media), you should write to one person. Picture them in your mind and talk only to them.

    One of my mentors suggested that I actually have a picture that matches my ideal client and stick it by my computer while I’m typing. That way, I’m imagining just writing to that one person who needs my help.

    The reason this is so important is that although you may be writing to multiple people, your email is arriving in your subscriber’s personal inbox. That is to say, they don’t see you speaking to the crowd. The crowd isn’t around. It’s just them at their computer, reading an email from you.

    So speak to that one person as if they’re the only one you’re talking to. Make it a conversation. And I promise that the person reading your email will feel a stronger connection with you and what you’re saying.

    2. You’re filling your emails up with so much text and pictures that it’s hard to follow. 

    I believe that emails should be incredibly easy to read. When people open your email, they should know exactly where to look, what to read, and where to go when they’re done reading. 

    Think about your own inbox. How many emails do you get a day?

    For me, it’s at least 50. Yikes, I know. So when I open an email that is way too busy visually, it stresses me out and, without even thinking, I delete it and move on to the next one.

    Don’t create an email that sends your subscriber straight to the delete key. 

    The good news about this is that it actually makes it easier on you! You do NOT need the stress of feeling like you have to come up with an overwhelming amount of content and pictures. 

    Start by choosing a simple format on your email service provider. Design is fine and be visually appealing, but studies have shown that plain-text emails perform better than super duper fancy ones. 

    In fact, the founder of ConvertKit—who is a designer—doesn’t even include fancy templates in ConvertKit’s email options because his experiments have shown again and again that people prefer simple emails over heavily designed ones.

    Does this mean you can’t add a little pizzazz to your emails? I don’t think so. But just don’t let your emails become visually confusing. If you add design, make sure it’s clear to the reader where they’re supposed to look.

    That said, write an email in plain, simple language like you would talk to a friend.

    Then, end with a very clear call to action. I would recommend limiting yourself to one call to action per email. So in one email, you might tell your subscriber to click to read your latest blog. In another email, you may tell them to take advantage of a limited-time discount your offering on a product.

    By giving your subscribers one task to complete, you’re upping the likelihood that they’ll actually do what you’re asking.

    3. Your newsletter isn’t adding tremendous value. 

    This is a hard one, I know. But really ask yourself if your emails are meeting a need. 

    Are you answering a big question people have? Or are you offering encouragement to a weary soul? Are you building camaraderie with someone who needs guidance? Or maybe you’re giving insider information to a hungry reader.

    Every email you send should add value. 

    4. You’re not being consistent. 

    Nurturing relationships takes time and it takes consistency. 

    Your relationship with the Lord is a perfect example. If you’re not daily seeking Him, reading His Word and listening for His voice, it is much harder to nurture your relationship with Him into all it could be. 

    Don’t get me wrong. This isn’t a guilt trip; it’s just how it is. Abiding is so much easier as you continually nurture your relationship with God. 

    In the same way, engaging your target audience is so much easier when you’re consistently nurturing your relationship with them. 

    That includes talking to them, listening to them and asking questions regularly. Relationships must always take precedence over sales. 

    5. You’re talking to the wrong audience. 

    Whoops! If you’re doing all the things above and people are still not opening your emails, then you may have a bigger problem. 

    Maybe people signed up for your newsletter for all the wrong reasons, or they signed up thinking you would provide one kind of content and you provided something different. 

    If that’s what’s happening with you, it’s totally OK.

    In cases like this, don’t be scared when you see people unsubscribe. Unsubscribes are really just cleaning out your email list for you of people who are unengaged and aren’t your target audience.

    In fact, having an unengaged email list can hurt you in the long run and make it more likely that your emails will be flagged as spam. 

    Did you know I offer coaching and writing services?

    If you’ve tried my suggestions above and still aren’t seeing the results you want, schedule a call with me and let’s figure out a plan that works for you. Or hire me to write your emails for you! Reach me at jennyrosespaudo@gmail.com.

    Click here for more information on the services I offer to help your business thrive.

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  • How to Blog When You Have No Time

    How to Blog When You Have No Time
    how to blog when you have no time

    I know plenty of people who know they should be blogging but just don’t have the time to do it.

    Their schedules are full of keeping their businesses running, taking care of their kids, and tending to the thousands of other things they’ve volunteered for. They just don’t have time to blog.

    I get that. 

    But also, respectfully, I disagree.

    I think if people were to let go of some of their blogging misconceptions, they would feel free to invest in this important content-marketing strategy.

    Hear me out.

    It’s true that blogging can become a full-time gig. Some people invest hours each day promoting their blogs on social media, engaging people on forums and pitching affiliates.

    But that’s not the only way to blog.

    So how can you blog when you have no time?

    My goal is that this article gives you some hope. If you want to start blogging but don’t know where to find the time for it, keep reading, my friend.

    How to Blog When You Have No Time

    Misconception #1: Promoting my blog and writing consistently take too long.

    No, they don’t.

    Promotion can be a black hole if you let it. So don’t let it.

    Learn the top one or two social media platforms your ideal clients use, and focus on those to promote your blogs.

    Don’t waste hours promoting your blog on forums or social media where no one will care. In the future, when you have more time to branch out, you can do that. But for right now, start with your core people.

    As for writing consistently, find a frequency that works for you. Right now, I’m working a full-time job in addition to maintaining this blog. So the frequency that works for me is once a week. 

    Find what’s right for you.

    Misconception #2: Writing one blog will take hours.

    It can, but it doesn’t have to. And it really shouldn’t.

    If your blog is a way to provide insight into your brand and show yourself to be an expert in your niche, then there are some simple ways to write blogs that don’t consume tons of time.

    First, write what you know.

    What are some of the main problems you see your customers facing? What advice would you give a client who was struggling with one of those problems? Write your blog as though you’re writing to that one person.

    Second, write out of your own experiences.

    Again, use examples from your own life to write your blogs. Tell your readers what has worked for you and what hasn’t. Tell stories about mistakes you’ve survived and lessons you’ve learned.

    Third, write like you’re having a conversation.

    Don’t make your blog stuffy. Often, writing takes us so long because we’re trying to sound smart. 

    You don’t have to fall for that time-waster. Write as though you’re talking to a friend. 

    An easy way to do this is to say what you want to communicate out loud. Then simply write out what you just said and clean up any grammatical yuckiness. (Yes, that’s the technical term.)

    Misconception #3: Editing my blog will take forever.

    If you’re a perfectionist, then, yes, it will take forever. 

    I know this because I’ve lived it. And still do sometimes.

    But blogs aren’t meant to be perfect. You’re not publishing your blog in a magazine or newspaper. So be willing for it to be less than perfect.

    This does NOT mean that it’s OK to let your blog look like a hot mess. But editing doesn’t have to take forever. Run the piece through a spell checker. Or ask a friend to look over it for you. Or look over it once or twice yourself. (Or hire someone to edit it for you, let’s be honest now.)

    But don’t require it to be perfect.

    Misconception #4: Making graphics for my blog will take forever.

    It certainly can if you don’t have the hang of it or if design isn’t your thing.

    It’s not mine, for sure.

    That’s why I purchased social media templates from Bluchic. (You can check them out here if you’d like.)

    I purchased the package when they were having a Black Friday sale. But there are tons of others out there.

    The templates may cost a little money, but they save you a ton of time.

    Another easy way to create social media graphics is on Canva.

    I introduced my mom to Canva a couple of months ago and she loves it! Some of the graphics she’s creating now are way better than mine, and I’m not even salty about it.

    Basically, Canva gives you templates you can edit and customize to make them unique for your purposes. They have templates for Facebook, Instagram, Pinterest and more. 

    Misconception #5: I don’t even know how to start.

    Here are a couple easy ways to introduce your blog:

    • Help the reader visualize the problem you’re trying to solve. Provide an example or a story.
    • Help the reader visualize the success they’re trying to achieve. Create a scenario in which the reader is the hero. Then tell them how to get there.
    • Start off with a controversial statement. Then explain why you think that way and how it will help your reader.

    Check out my full post on this topic here.

    Bonus Tips

    Just because I think you’re swell, here are three more tips to help you save time on blogging:

    1. If you’re an author, use short excerpts from your book and simply tweak the intros and outros.

    2. If you’re a pastor or speaker, use excerpts from transcripts of your sermons or talks.

    3. If you already write for social media, take your most popular posts and expand them just a bit. A blog doesn’t have to be long.

    The truth is that, yes, writing a consistent blog is a time commitment. But it doesn’t have to be a big one. You can streamline the process and make it work for you.

    As always, I’m here cheering you on!

    Hey, see that line of social buttons on the left side of your screen? If you liked today’s blog, click one of those buttons and share this article. 🙂

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  • 5 Tactics to Make Your Blog Easy to Read

    Make Your Blog Easy to Read
    make your blog easy to read

    If you want your blog to attract new readers, maintain people’s attention until the end, and rank well on search engines … you need to make your blog easy to read.

    Maybe that’s hard for you. If so, you’re in good company, my friend.

    By the time I graduated college, I was pretty good at writing academic prose professors loved. I followed all the grammar rules, cited my sources meticulously, and explained my arguments and methods in excruciating detail.

    But when I got hired at a Christian magazine, I quickly realized online readers didn’t want to read my thesis—or anything that resembled it.

    They wanted to get to the good stuff. And they wanted it quickly.

    If you struggle with clunky writing, here are a few tips I’ve learned along the way. These have greatly helped me in learning how to write in a way that makes people want to keep reading.

    Make Your Blog Easy to Read

    1. Write your blog like you talk.

    “In conclusion, the writing method to which many of the most reputable online authors and content developers ascribe requires that one research how consumers of online publications verbalize their thoughts and emotions and subsequently write in a like manner.”

    Stop it. You don’t talk like that.

    Instead, try: “Many of the best bloggers write the way people talk.”

    Write your blog like you’re talking to a friend. Granted, your writing should be a little cleaner since we tend to get pretty lazy with our grammar when we’re speaking.

    But still. Make your blog easy to read by letting it feel like a genuine conversation.

    2. Use headings often.

    Headings (like the ones I’m using throughout this article) make the structure of your blog super easy to follow.

    People don’t have to expend as much energy trying to figure out where your article is going when you have huge signposts (headings) to guide them.

    They’re also helpful because people often skim an article before they actually read it word for word. If they like what they see in your headings, they are more likely to actually read your blog in its entirety.

    And lastly, headings break up the monotony of gray in your blog. They add much-needed white space, giving your readers a chance to process what they read.

    Here’s a great article about the importance of white space on your blog.

    3. Write in short sentences and short paragraphs.

    Speaking of white space, another way to get more of it is by keeping your sentences and paragraphs short. Sometimes that means your paragraphs are only one or two sentences long. Sometimes just a couple words.

    The horror.

    No, seriously. It was really hard for me to write short paragraphs at first because the grammar freak in me knew it broke the rules.

    But that’s OK. Do it anyway.

    4. Make it practical.

    One of the major reasons people read blogs or look up articles online is because they want a solution to their problem.

    Naturally, they’re looking for articles that can solve those problems with practical advice.

    An easy way to make your writing more practical is to write with the readers’ pain point in mind. Then offer your solution.

    Use examples while you’re teaching your solution. Help your readers visualize the step you’re telling them to take. Tell stories of people who did (or didn’t do) what you’re teaching.

    5. End with a call to action.

    You readers want to walk away from your blog with at least one thing they can do to improve their condition.

    Make that one thing super clear.

    You can also end with telling your reader to do something that will take them deeper into your brand. For instance, sometimes I end my blogs by asking readers to share the article. Or I direct them to my Facebook page and ask them to connect with me.

    Blogs are an excellent way to nurture your relationship with your readers. Use it!

    OK, now that you have five new steps to make your blogs easier to read, I want you to do something. 

    Go back to one of your blogs and check to make sure it follows the five steps I’ve outlined in this article. If it doesn’t, then revise it and read it out loud. 

    I guarantee it will be a great improvement. 

    Until next time!

    P.S. Here are a few other articles I’ve written that will help you craft a blog that people will love to read:

    Top 17 Grammar Errors Christian Writers Make

    How Long Should My Blog Post Be?

    3 Terrible Ways to Intro Your Blog

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  • Practical Tips to Get Your Article Published in Major Magazines

    Get Published in Major Magazines
    Get published in major magazines

    You probably already know that getting your name published in major magazines is important for building credibility for your brand.

    But do you know how to make that happen?

    If you’re like most authors, business owners and ministers, the answer is most likely no.

    If you know me or have read many of my blogs, you already know that I used to work for a Chrisitian magazine. In my role as online news director, I received hundreds of submissions every week from people who want to get published in our online magazines.

    But I couldn’t publish all of them.

    So what separated those who got published from those who didn’t? The answer is multifaceted, but here are several tips to help you best position yourself to get published online.

    Get Published in Major Magazines

    Tip #1: Submit your articles to magazines that align with your niche.

    This one is simple. If your article isn’t faith-focused, don’t submit it to a Christian magazine. If your primary target audience is believers in business, don’t submit it to a parenting magazine.

    Make sure your article would contribute to the magazine’s main purpose before you submit it.

    The reason for this is that magazine editors receive so many submissions that only the best ones get published. And if your content isn’t a great fit, your email may be quickly deleted.

    Speaking of which, try to find the name and email address of the correct person you should submit your article to. If someone sends an article to our generic customer service email, I most likely won’t see it. It helps immensely when authors submit their articles directly to me.

    (Hint: Start by asking your followers what magazines and online publications they read.)

    Tip #2: Give the editor a little space.

    OK, I might be saying this because I’ve lived it. But it’s still true. 

    Editors get so many submissions that they can’t possibly keep up if every author is demanding special treatment. That might include sending multiple emails in a row asking if the editor received your submission or requesting multiple changes to the article once it’s online.

    Sometimes the editor can’t get back to you right away because they’re juggling so many priorities. 

    I have to be honest right now. When I see an author email me three times in a row about an article they’re submitting to me, and then email me again three hours later to see if I got their previous emails … it makes me not want to publish their stuff at all.

    Also, keep in mind that the editor’s job is not to promote you—it’s to do what’s best for their magazine.

    I really don’t mean that to sound harsh at all. It’s just how it is. 

    As an editor, I truly want what’s best for our writers. I want their names to get out there and for their businesses or ministries to grow. 

    But my first business priority has to be to protect and promote the magazine I work for. If your article doesn’t help me do those two things, please understand when I can’t use it.

    Tip #3: Don’t send a million articles all at once.

    I understand that sometimes writers get time to write in infrequent bursts. But if you submit five articles within a week’s span, don’t expect the editor to use all of them … or even more than one.

    If you really want to be published in major magazines, space out your submissions. Unless you’re using the strategy of “Here are five submissions, so hopefully one of them works for you!” 

    But that sounds like a lot of energy for little return.

    Tip #4: Be careful not to come across as pushy, entitled or “all that.”

    Gross.

    At risk of sounding negative, I do have to admit I have come across many ministry leaders who want to be published in our online magazine who acted entitled. 

    They write their emails as if they’re doing me a favor when I publish their article.

    Nuh-uh.

    Don’t do that. When your article gets published in major magazines, they’re helping you out. They’re promoting your name and brand to their audience. That’s huge.

    Don’t let the size of your ministry or the number of your followers cause you to become entitled and treat others badly.

    Always be a servant. Always be humble. I promise it will make editors actually want to publish your work.

    Your character speaks volumes.

    Tip #5: Edit, edit, edit!

    This one is so huge.

    If you want to submit an article to a major magazine, make sure it’s good! 

    Make sure you have a main point, solid takeaways, and an easy-to-follow structure. Pare your article down so it’s an ideal length.

    Check your grammar and make sure your syntax, spelling and overall flow is clean.

    I have received so many articles that matched our audience, but I couldn’t use them because the writing was so bad.

    If you are a thought leader who can’t write to save your life, then hire someone. Ask them to edit an excerpt from your book or write an article based on one of your teachings or sermons.

    But don’t turn in a half-baked article and expect the editor to publish it. Again, their job is to protect their magazine, and that includes from bad writing.

    Tip #6: Make your article relevant and tell a story.

    I’ve turned down countless press releases because all they did was promote the business, ministry or author.

    But when I see a press release that actually tells a story or comments on a hot current event, I’m all over it.

    Magazines publish stories. They publish commentary on relevant current events. Practical advice that pertains to their target audience.

    They won’t publish your one-sheet or your promo piece. Give them a story that their readers will actually care about.

    Here’s an example: When Kobe Bryant and his 13-year-old daughter died in an unexpected helicopter crash, it broke the news. Everyone was talking about it because it was so tragic and so shocking.

    For about two weeks after that horrible incident, I published multiple articles about it. Some of the writers were counselors or psychologists. Others were pastors. And still others were just cultural commentators. 

    But they all had something unique to say that I knew our readers would care about.

    Keep your eye on the news and cultural trends. Be ready to write an article when something happens that you have the knowledge and expertise to comment on. Then submit it as soon as you can.

    (Hint: Always remember that hot news items involve real human beings. Don’t trash someone after a tragedy. Be respectful and gracious in your writing, even when expressing a controversial opinion.)

    And there you have it. Six practical tips to help you get your article published in major magazines. 

    Still have questions about this? Email me at jennyrosespaudo@gmail.com and let’s chat!

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  • Top 17 Grammar Errors Christian Writers Make

    Top Christian Grammar Errors
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    If you’re prone to making grammar errors, I promise you’re not alone.

    In fact, that’s the very reason copy editors have jobs! Five years ago, I started my work at a Christian magazine as a copy editor. It was tedious, for sure, but I learned tons of great lessons along the way.

    One of the perks of being a copy editor for a couple years was I had the privilege of seeing many of the grammar errors Christian writers tend to make.

    And yes, some of them are distinct to Christian writers.

    I don’t mean to be the bearer of bad news, but I need to tell you something really important:

    The success of your business—or at least of your content marketing—hinges on the quality of your writing.

    One way to up the quality of your writing is to make your grammar as error-free as possible.

    With that in mind, here’s a list of the most common or unusual grammar errors I’ve seen over the years. Some of them make me laugh—others make me want to cry.

    I’ll let you choose how you want to respond (hopefully by avoiding them).

    ‘Welch Revival

    You may have already guessed that it should be the Welsh Revival, indicating the awakening that occurred in Wales between 1904 and 1905. 

    The first time I saw this mistake, I thought it was just a fluke. The second time, I thought it was a weird coincidence. The third time, I began to wonder if people viewed an abundance of grape juice as a genuine spiritual awakening.

    Thomas Bramwell Welch must be very pleased with himself from the grave. Or not.

    ‘The whole council of God

    The correct word here is “counsel.”

    A council is a group of people who help make decisions, often in the form of a legislative or advisory body.

    Counsel is the advice your pastor gives you. (Hence the word “counselor” as someone who offers counsel.)

    ‘The Holy Spirt’ or ‘the Holy Sprit

    Poor Holy Spirit—His name gets misspelled all the time.

    Oddly enough, I see this one a lot. It’s most likely just a slip of the finger on the keyboard.

    But every time it comes up in an article, I picture a stone fountain with a little cherub squirting water out of its mouth. I don’t know why.

    Its vs. it’s

    I know this one is confusing. That’s English for you. “Its” is possessive, as in “When Joe joined the company, he abided by its rules.” 

    “It’s,” on the other hand, is a contraction of “it is.” As in, “It’s cold outside.” Or “It’s time to stop using ‘it’s’ as possessive.”

    Your vs. you’re

    Another common one.

    “Your” is possessive. “Your shoes, your car, your clothes, your grammar error.”

    Meanwhile, “you’re” is a contraction of “you are.” “You’re not coming in your ugly old boots, are you?”

    Their, there, they’re

    Glory hallelujah amen. This. One.

    I can’t judge, though. I get it wrong sometimes, especially when I’m flying through a text.

    “Their” is possessive. “Their land, their hearts, their awkward smile.”

    “There” indicates position. “Put it over there.”

    And “they’re” is a contraction of “they are.” “They’re not coming over again, are they?”

    Em-dashes are not commas. Or periods. Or spaces. 

    Sorry, I just had to get that one off my chest. Em-dashes (this little guy: —) are very versatile and in some cases, they can take the place of commas, periods or spaces, but only for a very specific effect.

    I remember one writer who must have been obsessed with em-dashes. He used them at least five times per paragraph (and his paragraphs were short). I dreaded editing his stuff. 

    Two em-dashes within a sentence close off information that isn’t vital to the sentence, like this:

    “Jesus looked over at His disciples—who, despite hearing the same message three times, still didn’t get it—and smiled.”

    You can also use an em-dash to give an abrupt halt in your sentence. For example:

    “Stories like hers prove that Christ’s love truly is as strong as death, His jealousy unyielding as the grave—and not even addiction is strong enough to break it.”

    Capitalizing everything

    OK, why is this a Christian thing? I don’t understand.

    Is it because of certain capitalization in the New King James version of the Bible, and that’s just been culturally passed down through Christian culture?

    Or maybe we think we’re still in the 1700s.

    I’m not really sure, but I know that for some reason Christian writers love to Capitalize random Words in the Sentence in a Way that doesn’t seem to Make Sense.

    No shade here, though.

    Ellipses after every other word 

    For a blog or email, ellipses (…) are OK every once in a while. But if you’re writing for a publication, ellipses aren’t the best way to try to get the feel of your content across.

    The reason for that is ellipses aren’t a professional way to indicate a pause. Again, if you’re using them in your blog, go for it. But if you’re submitting an article to a magazine or online news medium, skip them. Let your words speak for themselves.

    I will say this, though: Ellipses are the proper way to indicate that content has been removed from a quote. So in the following sentence, the ellipses indicates that I took part of the guy’s quote out because it wasn’t relevant or vital to get the point across.

    “I wasn’t sure why he was so angry at me,” Charles said. “He didn’t seem like he was stressed or anything. … I guess I should’ve seen the signs.”

    Changing tense in the middle of a sentence or paragraph 

    We all know that doing this is bad for your writing. 😉

    But seriously, if you start out a paragraph addressing “you,” then keep using the second person. Don’t switch to we or they.

    Stay consistent.

    Not citing direct quotes or Bible verses

    Y’all, this is a big no-no.

    Cite your sources, and if possible, link directly to them (especially if it’s another person’s blog or a news article that you’re referencing for info).

    Than vs. then

    Again, another sneaky one. Tricksy hobbitses.

    “Than” indicates a comparison. For instance: “She was taller than he was.” “I’m more of an extravert than an introvert.”

    “Then” points to a moment in time. Example: “I gobbled my cereal, then ran upstairs to play video games.” “Then I heard a knock at the door.”

    ‘Publically’

    The correct spelling is “publicly.” Full disclosure, I mess this one up every once in a while.

    Prophecy vs prophesy

    Prophecy is a noun. “Isaiah gave a stern prophecy to the people of Israel.”

    Prophesy is a verb. “Isaiah prophesied judgment on God’s people if they didn’t repent.”

    Run-on sentences

    It’s one thing to have a super long sentence. It’s another thing to confuse commas with periods for four sentences in a row.

    Angel vs. angle

    This is an easy one to make. Again, it’s usually because your finger slips on the keyboard.

    But, I have to warn you—people will get pretty confused if you try to talk about guardian angles. 

    Public

    The king of all grammar errors.

    I wrestled with whether or not to include this one because my heart is not to be inappropriate at all! 

    But since I see so many authors misspell this and forget the L, I thought it was important to remind you: Please spell this right. Please. 

    Again, I promise I’m not trying to be crude. Every time I catch this error while editing someone’s work, I breathe a prayer of gratitude to God that it didn’t slip past me.

    I hope this list helps you next time you sit down to write your faith-based article. If you have seen any other common grammar errors we Christian writers make, share them in the comments below!

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  • 3 Terrible Ways to Intro Your Blog

    blog intro

    How to intro your blog

    As an online magazine editor, there is one massive mistake I see writers make with their blog over and over.

    Sadly, this mistake often costs them. A lot.

    That terrible mistake is called, simply put, “writing bad intros.”

    People might click on their blogs because of crazy amazing headlines, but if what they read next doesn’t pull them in … see ya later.

    And as you know, the quicker your reader leaves your site after clicking, the higher your bounce rate. (That’s not good!)

    And still, for some reason, many of us love to write intros that dance around the topic for a long time before jumping in to the meat of the story. This might mean telling an unrelated personal tale, writing about how bad your day was yesterday to get it off your chest, or simply rambling.

    If that’s you, don’t feel bad. We’ve all done it!

    Instead of beating yourself up, though, let’s talk through this.

    3 Terrible Blog Intros

    Why do we write bad intros? Maybe it’s because we’re trying to figure out how to word our main point. 

    Maybe we’re trying to “set the stage.” Instead, we lead our readers down a rabbit trail that even Alice can’t find her way out of.

    You see, blog intros have a specific purpose: Hook the reader.

    This is especially true of online articles, where you don’t have much time to grab people’s attention.

    A bad intro completely defeats the purpose of an irresistible headline. When you start your article with something that’s not actually relevant to your main point, you lose the reader.

    Let me show you what I mean. 

    3 Downright Awful Blog Intros

    These are NOT good opening strategies:

    1. Spend 6 paragraphs telling a personal story that has little connection to your main point.

    No lie, I one time edited an article in which the author spent three pages talking about the death of his family pet rodent. 

    His main point (which I don’t even remember anymore but had a spiritual tone to it) didn’t come up until the final two paragraphs of the article.

    After first reading that article, I stared at it with my mouth hanging open for a good two minutes. I was a wee bit horrified.

    I cannot emphasize this enough: Blogs for other people are not an opportunity for you to indulge yourself.

    If you’re using a blog to build a loyal following for your business, your writing has to be about your readers.

    (Unless the reason people are following you is because they deeply relate to your personal stories. And in that case your personal story should be the main point.)

    If you’re writing for others, then do exactly that. Write for them.

    2. Open with irrelevant pleasantries and dance around your topic until you finally hit it five paragraphs later.

    I’m not trying to be mean with this one, I promise. People do want to feel connected with you. It’s a great idea to write a blog like you’re having a conversation with a friend.

    But keep in mind that a blog are still a form of writing.

    When you’re sitting down to coffee with a friend, you expect pleasantries in the beginning. They build the rapport so you can feel more comfortable to talk about what’s really going on in your life.

    But with writing, people want to know immediately what they’re reading about and what they’re about to learn.

    Maybe not everyone feels this way. But if I’m reading a blog with a headline that promises to teach me how to make a healthy version of fettuccine alfredo pizza, I don’t want to spend the first third just reading pleasantries. (Chances are, I’m scrolling straight down to the recipe anyway.)

    Again, a little is OK if it’s intentional and in your voice, but don’t make it too long. Get to the point quickly.

    3. Open with a well-known fact that adds little value to your main point.

    Surprising statistics can make good openers. Stating facts that we all know do not.

    This one is certainly not as bad as the first two. 

    The problem, though, is that it’s often the low-hanging fruit we reach for when we can’t come up with something more powerful.

    Here’s one of the biggest offenders: Dictionary definitions.

    I’m sure you’ve read a blog or article that started immediately with a word definition.

    Maybe an article on humility started out like this:

    Humility: freedom from pride or arrogance : the quality or state of being humble

    But we all already know what humility means. And even if you’re introducing a word that your readers may not actually know the definition of, it’s better to save it for after your intro when you’ve already hooked them.

    Just saying. You can make your intros stronger.

    So let me show you how!

    4 Ways to Hook Your Reader With Your Intro

    Intros can hook the reader through a couple of strategies (or a combination):

    1. Touch on the reader’s pain point.

    If you hear me say this all the time, it’s because it’s just that important! Talk to your readers and find out what pain point your service or product directly helps fix.

    2. Open with a short, relevant story that is either shocking or makes the reader see themselves.

    This is like the flipped version of mistake #2. 

    Stories can actually be a good thing … when used strategically. 

    Use your introductory story to relate to your reader by sharing something personal you’ve been through. Or open with a relevant story they’ll still relate to and that leads you to the solution for their problem.

    3. Introduce a controversial opinion. Then explain.

    This one is so good for hooking readers. 

    My time working as a news director taught me that people love controversy. And as a content creator and curator, I could either use that knowledge responsibly or irresponsibly.

    My opinion?

    Rule #1: DON’T be salacious. Just don’t.

    Don’t be that person who loves to stir up controversy just for the fun of it because you know it will get you more traffic. 

    I have received article submissions from writers who love to use this tactic. In the long run, I think it affects your brand and your image. 

    Always take the higher road.

    Rule #2: DO open with controversy when you can genuinely offer a different way of thinking that actually benefits your readers.

    For example, while many others on the internet may be promoting a certain method of disciplining children, you have a wildly different approach that you’ve seen work.

    So say that in the beginning. Tell the world how you’re different. And why it works.

    4. Open with mystery.

    With this kind of intro, you want to tease the reader a little bit (not in a mean way!). 

    You might open by saying how one simple trick revolutionized your relationship with your child.

    Or maybe share how nothing seemed to be working to lose weight. And then you discovered your mistake …

    These kinds of intros make the reader want to know what the secret is.

    And I’m sure it’s a juicy one!

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  • Top 9 Places to Find Copyright-Free Photos

    Copyright Free Photos

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    Need to know where to find stunning free photos?

    You’ve come to the right place.

    If you’ve been blogging for a while, you know just how crucial good photos are to the success of your blog.

    And if you’re just starting out, allow me to be the first to tell you this: You need good photos for your blog!

    I’ve already written about why good blog photos are so important. In that post, I also share how to avoid the three biggest mistakes I see people make with their photos.

    One of those huge mistakes is that some entrepreneur bloggers are actually using photos illegally.

    And yes, this is a big deal.

    Copyright-Free Photos for Your Blog

    OK So What Photos Can I Use?

    Just in case you don’t know, the vast majority of photos you see online are copyrighted, meaning you can’t legally use them on your site or your products.

    Some photos lie under what’s called Creative Commons, which is a U.S.-based nonprofit that offers copyright licenses free of charge. 

    These licenses allow creators to publish their work under a copyright while still allowing others to use and distribute them to varying degrees.

    The copyrights range from CC0 to CC4.0.

    CC0 is public domain. This means anyone can use the work, even commercially, modify it, and can do so without crediting the creator.

    Other licenses depend on whether the creator wants people to cite them as the source, link to the copyright license, use the image or video for commercial reasons, or modify it in any way.

    A lot of Creative Commons photos on Flickr fall under the CC2.0 license, which requires you to cite the creator, link to the license and indicate if any changes were made to the original work.

    I think it’s fair to say you DON’T want to have to do that with photos you use on your blog or social media.

    Plus, the scary part about that is creators can change the license on their photos.

    And even though they’re not supposed to restrict the rights of the original copyright, they may send you a lovely email demanding you pay them money for using their photo.

    If that happens, chances are, you don’t have evidence of the original license.

    That’s why I strongly believe you should stay away from any photos other than public domain.

    Where to Find Copyright-Free Photos for Your Blog

    Thankfully, there are actually a ton of websites out there that offer copyright-free photos at no cost.

    However—and this is a big however—not all these free-photo sites are great for business bloggers like you to use.

    Some of them say they’re public domain but request that you don’t use the photos commercially. 

    Is using these photos on your blog or social media for your business technically a commercial purpose?

    I wouldn’t risk it. Enough said.

    That’s why I created a list of free-photo sites that are great for business bloggers.

    For each site on this selective list, I’ve either used them myself or researched them enough to feel confident in their safety.

    I also pared my list down to sites that have search bars and are easy to navigate. 

    Some high-quality photo sites are not created for browsing, which can make it hard to quickly find a photo that matches your article.

    I wanted to give you the kind of list that I would use for my own blog.

    WARNING: Before you start browsing these sites, you should know that, depending on what you look up, some of these sites might have several photos that you and I find inappropriate.

    By that, I mean images that are sexually suggestive or include people dressed immodestly.

    A couple of them (like Pixabay) have a “Safe Search” setting you can turn on, which will take out most, if not all, inappropriate photos. But others don’t, so just beware.

    And now, the list!

    9 Sites That Offer Gorgeous, Copyright-Free Photos

    1. Unsplash

    Unsplash might be the most popular public domain stock image site right now. I remember trying to use this site a few years ago, and they just didn’t have enough images to meet my needs.

    But now, the site is chock-full of copyright-free photos that are truly gorgeous. I’m always impressed with the quality of their images.

    They also have a lot of business-focused stock imagery, so you will likely find a lot of what you need here.

    (This is one of the sites I have seen inappropriate photos on, though, so I encourage you to use caution!)

    Be sure to read their license page before using!

    2. Pexels

    Pexels is a definite runner-up to Unsplash in the quality department. Their photos are crisp and clean and rarely have that cheesy stock-image look to them.

    Just like Unsplash, though, I will warn you that this site also contains some suggestive photos, so just be wary of what you type in the search bar!

    Check out their license here.

    3. Pixabay

    Pixabay is great because of its massive amount of photos. I’m not kidding, I can find photos on almost every topic on this site.

    But unfortunately, its quality also tends to be lower than Unsplash’s and Pexels’. Because of that, if you type “laptop” into the search bar, you will find LOTS of related photos, but not all of them will actually look good. Some of them might even be clipart.

    This may be because Pixabay also includes a lot of modified photos, making some of them look a bit cheesy.

    Another word of caution: this site might also bring up inappropriate photos depending on what you search for.

    Because of that, I recommend turning on the “Safe Search” setting.

    To do this, first type something into the search bar. Then simply check the box labeled “Safe Search” in the upper-right corner.

    And of course, check their license page before you start browsing!

    4. PublicDomainPictures.net

    Quality-wise, I would rank Public Domain Pictures at around the same level as Pixabay. But they have fewer photos than Pixabay does, I would say.

    They also offer a paid membership, which gives you access to more photos.

    They’re still a great place to look for photos, though, and I definitely use them from time to time.

    The one weird thing I don’t like about it is they don’t have a license page. So keep this in mind and be a little extra careful with what you use from this site.

    5. Wikimedia Commons

    Wikimedia Commons is a great place to find historic photos that are public domain.

    Blogging about Martin Luther King Jr.? Wikimedia Commons has a CC0 photo for that. Writing about the founding of the United States? Wikimedia has photos for that too.

    Just make sure you check every single image’s copyright info before using it. 

    Sometimes CC2.0, CC3.0 or CC4.0 images (Flickr!) are uploaded to Wikimedia Commons, and I would steer clear of those.

    6. Negative Space

    I love the sleek feel of this site. They offer a wide variety of photos, though perhaps not as many as Unsplash, Pexels, or Pixabay.

    Also, be careful not to click on the Related Photos via Shutterstock on the right of the photo you’re looking at.

    Unless, of course, you want to throw a massive wad of cash at a single photo.

    Read their license page for more info.

    7. Foodiesfeed

    I haven’t used this particular site much myself since food and cooking are not my niche. 

    But if yours is, then this is a great site to use!

    If you check their license page, you will see confirmation that all their photos are CC0 (public domain).

    8. BarnImages

    BarnImages has some stellar photos.  

    Every photo on this site was either taken by the founders or by their colleagues. As a result, the images have a consistent, artistic feel.

    The free photos on this site are allowed for commercial and non-commercial use, like the other sites on this list.

    Also like the rest of this list, you may not sell the photos as prints or photo stock or say they are your own. 

    For you, this means not including these photos in digital or physical products you sell. But feel free to use them for your blog.

    They also request you do not use their images for “pornography, hate speech or other illicit content.”

    I don’t see this being a problem for you, though.

    Right? 

    9. StockSnap

    StockSnap is another site with a beautiful layout and gorgeous photos to match. I would actually rank it up there pretty closely with Unsplash. You’ll have fun with this one.

    Read their license before getting started.

    Should You Use Government Photos?

    If you’re looking for a picture of a particular national site or government official, sometimes government photos are helpful. 

    I will say, there is some nuance to this. Read this page to get a stronger understanding of which government photos are public domain and how you are and are not allowed to use them. 

    (For instance, you can’t have a photo of a government employee holding your product as if endorsing it.)

     

    There you have it, my friend!

    Nine stellar photo sites for your stellar blog.

    As always, email me at jennyrosespaudo@gmail.com if you have questions about how to choose photos for your blog.

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  • The Ultimate Cure for Writer’s Block

    Writer's Block

    Writer's block

    I feel your pain, my friend. And that pain is called “writer’s block.”

    You’ve set aside a large chunk of time to write (which was probably a miracle in itself).

    You’ve set your writing space up perfectly. You have your coffee, your silence and your fully functioning computer (another miracle).

    You sit down to start writing and … you got nothing.

    You try taking a few minutes to think and brainstorm. You walk around the house a bit and then try again. You try freewriting to get your creative juices flowing.

    But every word you type is like wrangling a chew toy out of the mouth of your hyperactive bulldog. 

    That, my friend, is called writer’s block.

    I hear about it all the time in Facebook groups I’m a part of for writers, entrepreneurs and bloggers. It’s like a horrible flu we all hope we don’t get but definitely will—and it will take you down.

    But the answer I want to offer for your writer’s block is not the answers you’ll find in your Facebook groups. I’m not going to tell you to make a mind map or take a brisk walk or do some word association.

    Those don’t solve your real problem with writer’s block.

    After all, the only thing worse than not knowing what to write is writing something your audience doesn’t care about.

    You can brainstorm and free write until you’re worn to the bone, but it won’t actually help you if you’re writing the wrong thing.

    The best cure I can give you for writer’s block is simply this:

    Find out what your audience wants.

    You don’t have a hobby blog. You have a business blog. That means you aren’t writing for yourself. Rather, you’re writing for someone else. This isn’t about you; it’s about your audience.

    So stop thinking about what you want to write and start thinking about what your audience needs.

    Here are some questions to get you thinking:

    1. What was the last question someone in your audience asked you regarding your area of expertise?
    2. What was the last time you witnessed someone in your audience make a mistake that you knew you had the answer to?
    3. What are some fears your audience has expressed in their comments, reviews, questions or conversations with you?
    4. What are some goals your clients have and what are the best strategies to reach them?
    5. What are some objections or mental blocks people have that keep them from purchasing your product? 
    6. What is something you’ve seen your audience get confused about?
    7. What are some tools or apps you use to make your job and life easier that your audience would care about?
    8. What is a transformation you’ve gone through that has revolutionized your business and could help your clients?
    9. What success have you seen one of your clients have after purchasing your product? Tell their story. (This doesn’t have to be overly salesy. Just tell the story and focus on the mindset shifts and strategies they used to be successful.)
    10. What mistake have you made recently and what did you learn from it?

    How to Find the Answers to These Questions

    Some of these questions you can answer all on your own because they’re based on your experience, but others—not so much.

    For questions that relate directly to your audience, the best place to get answers is their own mouths. Or hands, I suppose.

    Look at their comments online. Read the reviews they leave for your products or services or content. Listen to their complaints. You can even try calling them!

    The point is: listen. Listen to the words they’re saying. And then listen to the words underneath what they’re saying.

    I’m not trying to sound mystical when I say that. The words we say are fueled by motives. And sometimes those motives aren’t as blatant as we think they are. 

    Sometimes we don’t even know our own motives!

    Proverbs 18:4 says that “the words of a man’s mouth are deep waters” (ESV). 

    Sometimes—dare I say, oftentimes—we have to look beyond the surface of people’s words and ask ourselves why they said that. What pain or desire is fueling their remarks?

    Why is this homeschooling mom frustrated with her kids and their school? Is it because she feels like they don’t obey her? If so, why is that? Is she overwhelmed by the chaos in her home? Is her fourth-grader struggling to learn to read?

    Sometimes we don’t have enough information to go on and may struggle to find the accurate motives behind a person’s words. 

    But it’s always important to ask and search and ponder. 

    Jesus did this so many times! When Nicodemus came to Jesus in the middle of the night and told Him he believed God was with Him, Jesus didn’t respond with a mere “Oh, gee, thanks Nicodemus. I appreciate your vote of confidence.”

    Instead, Jesus immediately touched on the secret need in Nicodemus’ heart. He told him: “Unless one is born again, he cannot see the kingdom of God” (John 3:3).

    As someone who is keenly aware of how my words and actions might make other people feel, Jesus’ response makes me feel all sorts of awkward. 

    But it shouldn’t, because Jesus knew the real reason Nicodemus came to Him. In the middle of the night. With a seemingly random, not-so-popular compliment.

    Jesus heard the words. He saw the underlying motive. And He offered a solution to the real need.

    As a Jesus-focused business owner, you aren’t just giving clients what they say they want. You’re looking past the words and giving them what they really need. And if that makes you afraid, then maybe it’s time to start doing things afraid.

    So let’s try this again.

    Find your quiet spot. Get your fully functioning computer. Set aside your time for deep work. And start typing.

    This time, watch the words start flowing and say goodbye to writer’s block.

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  • How to Write a Headline That Gets Your Audience to Click

    How to Write a Headline

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    You’re frustrated, and I get it. 

    You slaved over your latest blog to provide meaningful, value-packed content that you know will revolutionize your readers’ lives. 

    It meets their needs. It speaks to their problem. It’s what they’re looking for!

    You can’t help but smile as you post it and promote it on social media because you know it’s just that good.

    But then a day goes by and you have like 15 clicks. Five days later—16. 

    What went wrong?

    The most likely reason your blog flopped isn’t that your content wasn’t good enough. God gave you a message and you’re called to share it!

    Instead, chances are the real problem was with one of the most crucial parts of your entire article: your headline.

    How Important Is Your Headline?

    The late marketing guru David Ogilvy recommended that advertisers spend 80% of their budget on the headline. 80%!

    That’s a large percentage to spend on a single line of copy. (Especially considering your article is likely 70 times as long as your headline.)

    But I’m convinced Ogilvy was absolutely right. In my experience as an online editor, I’ve noticed that the amount of clicks an article gets correlates almost exactly with the quality of the headline!

    When I first started working as an editor, I couldn’t write a headline to save my life. It was a huge mystery to me. “Just tell me what to write!” is what I wanted to scream.

    But as time went on and I kept writing more headlines, I noticed which ones got people to click and which ones didn’t.

    Check out my free cheat sheet for 19 captivating headlines that you can tweak to make sense for your audience and get them to click on your articles! CLICK HERE to get your free headline cheat sheet: 19 Headlines That Will Capture Your Audience’s Attention (And Get Them Clicking)!

    Now, granted, you will never be able to convince me that headline-writing is a pure science. There will always be a weird x-factor that no one can explain regarding why one story explodes and another trickles out of public sight.

    And yet, there truly are several practical things you can do with headlines to ensure that your article gets as much love as possible. 

    Here are the main lessons I learned that dramatically improved my headline-writing game:

    1. Speak to the felt need or pain point with your headline.

    I know this sounds like marketing jargon, but it’s actually super simple.

    Speaking to a felt need or pain point simply means understanding what your audience is feeling, what they want, what keeps them up at night, what burdens their souls, and what they wish they could change in their lives.

    Understanding an audience’s emotions and motives is the most valuable thing you could do for writing better headlines.

    Don’t think like a writer at this point in the game. You’ve already written the content. You know it’s good. 

    Headline-writing is not the place to put your emphasis on being super cutesy, poetic or creatively ambiguous. It’s not that those things never work. It’s that it’s easy to get lost in those tactics and lose the felt need that your headline desperately needs to address.

    Writing headlines is when it’s time to think like a consumer. Pretend you’re your ideal client, scrolling through Facebook looking for your cousin’s photo of the humongous tree that crashed through her roof. 

    You’re not going to stop hunting for your cousin’s photo because you saw an article titled “The Solace of Spring.”

    But if you’re a young mom, you might stop if the article said “How I Got My Rebellious 3-Year-Old to Finally Stop Throwing Daily Tantrums.”

    See the difference?

    2. Use eye-catching words.

    there are other words that naturally draw attention no matter who’s reading them.

    Words that are eye-catching in and of themselves tend to be dramatic, unexpected and underused.

    For example, which would catch your attention more:

    “How to Deal With a Rebellious Child”

    Or

    “How to Extinguish Your Toddler’s Worst Tantrums (Without Losing Your Mind)”

    Maybe some of you are more drawn to the simplicity of the first headline, but I guarantee that the majority of people would be more intrigued by the second.

    While some words tend to draw attention no matter who you are, there are other words that are more confined to your specific audience (words they’re familiar with and talk a lot about).

    If you know your audience loves homeschool curriculum based on living books (also known as the Charlotte Mason method), use that phrase! Non-homeschooling people might not know what a living book is, but your audience does—so use it!

    3. Use numbers every once in a while in your headline.

    Listicles are a consistent attention-grabber. 

    Not only do numerals draw attention to headlines anyway, but listicles tend to give easy wins and practical advice. Readers don’t mind giving a little of their time to read your stuff if they know they’re going to get some concrete value out of it.

    (On the off chance you don’t know what a listicle is, it’s an article that centers on a numbered list, as shown by the headline. For instance, “10 Ways Green Smoothies Boost Your Overall Health” would be a listicle.)

    Odd numbers supposedly do best in headlines. People I would consider writing and marketing experts have told me this countless times. 

    But this doesn’t give you license to come up with a bogus point or tip just to take your list number from 8 to 9. Don’t force yourself to create an extra point if it doesn’t actually add value. 

    Another caution: Don’t overdo it. Listicles are great, but people can get irritated if every single piece of your content starts with a number.

    Listicles are like salt. Some people love a lot of salt on their meals. Others only need a dash. But no one wants to eat a bowl full of it. (And if you do, maybe have a talk with your doctor.)

    4. Make a promise, then deliver on it.

    Another important thing you can do in headlines is make a promise. Again, headlines are basically the first thing people read that tell them why they should click on your article and read.

    If the information or encouragement in your article can make a change in the reader’s life, then tell them what that change is. 

    Keep in mind that promises should be specific, timely, and practical/doable.

    Here’s an example of that: 

    How to Get Your Child to Eat Broccoli (and Love It!) in 2 Weeks

    This headline makes a promise to me (the reader) that if I apply the principles in the article, my child will not only eat their broccoli, but love it (specific and practical) in two weeks (timely).

    Please keep in mind this huge warning: Never overpromise in your headline. Don’t tell your reader that you will show them how to lose 10 pounds in one week if that isn’t actually realistic or likely. 

    Overpromising in your headline is the easiest way to become clickbait and cause your audience to lose trust in you.

    Make a promise, but be realistic about what that promise is. Then, in your article’s content, deliver on that promise.

    5. Add some headline mystery.

    Headlines with mystery make people feel like you know something they don’t–but desperately need to!

    For instance, if you read “Lose 5 Pounds of Fat in 2 Weeks With This Simple Diet Change,” you might wonder, What diet change is she talking about? Do I need to make that change to my diet?

    You can add mystery to headlines of promise (like in my example above), or you can add it to headlines that play on your readers’ fears.

    I know playing on your readers’ fears might sound manipulative, but it doesn’t have to be that way.

    For example, if you read “This Common Blogging Mistake Could Cost You Hundreds of Clicks,” you will want to know what that common mistake is because you care about your blog.

    Going back to my clickbait soapbox, make sure the fear you are presenting is actually a real problem. Don’t say in your headline that the fear you are presenting will do more damage than it really will.

    Be honest. Be real. Write compelling headlines.

    You can do this!

    Email me with some of your latest headline ideas at jennyrosespaudo@gmail.com. I’d love to hear from you!

    P.S. If you’re still struggling with writing compelling headlines, I think you’ll love my free cheat sheet: 19 Irresistible Headlines.

    In it, I provide 19 headlines that are irresistible and explain why they work. I offer a formula for each headline so that you can easily tweak it to make it work for your content and audience.

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